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  • Smooth Criminal

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    It was twice that they killed him and it explains how he came back.
    July 30th, 2010 at 12:59am
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    um one quick question before i read this story:
    HOW THE HECK DOES EDWARD KEEP SHOWING UP!!!! WHAT RILEY AND ALLYSSA HAVE KILLED HIM LIKE 4 TIMES ALREADY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMGOSH!!!! luv your writing though!
    July 29th, 2010 at 06:35pm
  • Smooth Criminal

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    I was actually planning on a little something like that. You'll have to wait and see. I never have time to do this story, so. I don't know.
    March 28th, 2010 at 05:19pm
  • medusacascade

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    Super duper awesome.
    But,
    it would be amazingly fantastic if we had more Edward/Allysa action. But that's just me and my love for ZQ. I'd love you forever if you did :D
    March 28th, 2010 at 12:57am
  • Smooth Criminal

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    klutz.of.ishpeming:
    lalalala lalalala hey hey hey gooodbye
    I like this one... the twins remind me of ann. cute on teh outside, werid and scary on the inside
    Hee hee. :tehe:
    July 15th, 2009 at 08:52pm
  • klutz.of.ishpeming

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    lalalala lalalala hey hey hey gooodbye
    I like this one... the twins remind me of ann. cute on teh outside, werid and scary on the inside
    July 15th, 2009 at 08:44pm
  • Smooth Criminal

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    true.til.the.end.:
    well u still write great chapters but i have one thing to say..... don't KILLL yourself either!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you are such a DRAMA QUEEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Say what? I'm not going to kill myself. That would ruin everything. I may make myself lose an ear or something...Just kidding. I wouldn't do that to my beautiful ears. Lol.
    July 7th, 2009 at 10:23pm
  • musiclover26

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    well u still write great chapters but i have one thing to say..... don't KILLL yourself either!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you are such a DRAMA QUEEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    July 7th, 2009 at 10:09pm
  • Smooth Criminal

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    You guys are most likely going to live, but I am going to make myself....I'm not going to finish that sentence. :tehe:
    July 1st, 2009 at 08:52pm
  • klutz.of.ishpeming

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    I WOULD LIKE TO LIVE...LERV IT!!!!
    July 1st, 2009 at 07:56pm
  • musiclover26

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    i have one hting to say to you besides the normal i loved it thing.......... I BETTER NOT DIE!!!!! i want to totally stay in the story....
    June 26th, 2009 at 11:13pm
  • Smooth Criminal

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    I honestly have the urge to stop now. My brain is just hoovering over too many fan fict ideas and I can't concentrate on this one. It may be a while before I make a new chapter. Then again, it may not.
    June 1st, 2009 at 04:39am
  • musiclover26

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    wow lyss you have out done ur self again!!!! I loved it
    May 31st, 2009 at 12:46am
  • Smooth Criminal

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    Thanks to all.
    May 30th, 2009 at 09:15pm
  • klutz.of.ishpeming

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    i lerv this book!
    May 30th, 2009 at 07:58pm
  • Smooth Criminal

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    klutz.of.ishpeming:
    as I have said thru the whole series...I love this book!
    please don't make me afriad!
    Well, I have to make it interesting...I have to make you scared for a little while. Maybe not through the whole time. I'm still debating against myself here. Disgust
    May 20th, 2009 at 11:22pm
  • klutz.of.ishpeming

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    as I have said thru the whole series...I love this book!
    please don't make me afriad!
    May 20th, 2009 at 02:23pm
  • Smooth Criminal

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    klutz.of.ishpeming:
    I just ;love this story
    Thank you, Bria Johnson. Dance
    May 20th, 2009 at 01:40am
  • klutz.of.ishpeming

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    I just ;love this story
    May 20th, 2009 at 01:38am
  • Smooth Criminal

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    true.til.the.end.:
    Lyssie how could you??? Kissing Edward like that??? By the way, why don't I have powers in this very long story?? Answer my questions!!!!! By the way... WRITE MORE!!! I LOVED IT!!! :D
    Because you know everything, in the story, and Bria or Diane don't. But Bria is going to find out eventually because Sam wants to tell her. So, yeah. Alyssa to the rescue of Ann! Clap
    May 18th, 2009 at 10:52pm