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  • Cheye13

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    I can understand how this was a difficult challenge. I enjoyed reading this and I really liked the word choices and mood. It would be a very interesting plot. When it's a drabble, short as it is, every word counts, and I could feel every word... Every word had its weight. Well writted Clap
    September 3rd, 2009 at 06:16am
  • Glamophonic

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    I totally have a layout with that picture. Awesome.
    But the drabble was haunting in such a good way. I really, really loved it.
    May 7th, 2009 at 04:19am
  • stupify.

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    I liked it. =]

    The font was just a teensy bit dark, but I really liked it. =]
    Thanks. :cute:

    It was? :think: Should I change it?

    It didn't seem that way on my laptop...
    April 26th, 2009 at 11:14pm
  • Rian Dawson

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    I liked it. =]

    The font was just a teensy bit dark, but I really liked it. =]
    April 25th, 2009 at 08:27pm
  • Oliver Twist

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    Not bad, not bad. I like the ambiguity of it all, how you don't explain the characters, the setting. I suppose that's the point of a drabble though, :D

    I liked it, you should try some longer stuff, but definitely a good start.
    April 24th, 2009 at 01:04am
  • Saviour .

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    Hehe.. first comment =)

    I really like this story so far, it seems like it's going to be really interesting. And I can't wait to see what happens!!

    Keep up the awesome job!

    x Kamrynnnnnnnnn

    => If you ever want to take the time to check out some of my stories, I wouldn't complain =P Comments/feedback are always appreciated as well =D
    April 24th, 2009 at 01:01am