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  • shesanimrod.

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    I was browsing through the "Story Finders!" thread, and someone mentioned that they were looking for a one shot that was in a point of view of a sock. I laughed at the ridiculousness of the idea, but I clicked on the link to the summary page of this story, and proceeded to read it. I was completely blown away at how well written it was. And I loved your use of personification. It was great. :XD I actually felt terrible for an inanimate object! I really enjoyed it, despite the bizarreness of it. Great job! :D
    September 27th, 2009 at 10:33pm
  • MCRLUCY

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    SUBLIME - I've never ever ever felt so sorry for a sock in all my life! Great metaphor. Excellent writing.
    December 10th, 2007 at 12:47am
  • beankun

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    Hahaha! That was funny but good. I read something similar once; a poem about beer. But, to echo your other fans, you're such a good writer! Yes!
    December 8th, 2007 at 06:40pm
  • Fueled By Dana

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    I loved it! Very nice.
    July 17th, 2007 at 12:03pm
  • Kinky; thunder.

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    Oh Borris darling that story was absolutely brillant.. the way you described the sock and it's feelings towards the girl made it seem so real... I could totally picture that happening with humans :tehe:..

    I really loved the ending.. damn Borris you're such an awesome writter.. Tony adores you and your beautiful sock story :D
    July 16th, 2007 at 03:37pm
  • The Way

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    Wow. You little genius you!

    You took a bittersweet spin on an almost ridiculous prompt. I love how you made it all come together in the end.

    And the originality... you are probably the only person who has ever written a story FROM A SOCK'S POV and made it work to your advantage. As weird as it sounds, you made me kind of sympathize with the sock's emotions. Description was lovely.

    Great story. Didn't see it coming at all.

    You're like, this wonderful writer who needs to get more credit 'round here. I'm really glad I found you and got to read your stories.

    You're a Mibba legend in the works. :lmfao
    July 15th, 2007 at 12:03am
  • Bravo

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    lmfao
    that poor sock!!

    it was great though, good job!
    July 14th, 2007 at 12:07pm
  • dr. faustus

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    That was fucking beautiful. I didn't see that coming. You put so much into this and Iliked loved it. I liked the plot and story line. The descriptions were flawless which was great. You aced this challenge. I really mean it not because it was mine but you're a great writer and I enjoyed reading it as much as you did writing it. I mean it. :D
    July 14th, 2007 at 09:18am
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