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  • Triskelion

    Triskelion (150)

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    I really like the story and it had a really good plot line which kept me reading the whole way through, i could imagine it all.

    Well done :)
    June 8th, 2009 at 11:07pm
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    Congrats on winning the competition :) I know there were only 3 entries, but still!

    I like the way you focused on Steven's feelings of inadequacy throughout; I think this gives a more realistic feel to the plotline, and drew me into the story.

    Thanks for entering and well done again.
    June 8th, 2009 at 08:40pm
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