Vs. Groudon & Kyogre - Comments

I really like the story and it had a really good plot line which kept me reading the whole way through, i could imagine it all.

Well done :)

Congrats on winning the competition :) I know there were only 3 entries, but still!

I like the way you focused on Steven's feelings of inadequacy throughout; I think this gives a more realistic feel to the plotline, and drew me into the story.

Thanks for entering and well done again.