Symphony Of Sympathy - Comments

I just read this whole story and I think it's very interesting and I hope you continue it! You're a great writer and I hope to read more (:

he killed himself.
That's so depressing.
And now he's haunting her too?
Poor girl.
She shouldn't have been leading him on though.
I absolutely lovelovelove this(:

love love love this story!
xxxxxxx

I rubbed at my closed eyes, wanting nothing more than this delusion to stop. "Yeh aren’t fuckin' real!" I screamed at her. When my eyes opened, Sierra was still sitting on my bed.
But this time, she wasn’t alone.
-oh I see

Thats sooooooo not fair to her!!! its not fair. No no no conner.

Awwwww!!!! HERE COMES CONNER!!! poor shi. I feel bad for her. Thank god MY dead sister/ex boyfriend doesnt haunt me!

NONONONONONONONO

Conner isn't allowed to haunt her too.

NOOOOOOO

She doesn't need all this shit. :(

Ok i have just read chapters 1-20 and i have two things to say.
i like the story, it's alittle harsh in places like when tom tells her that connor deserve better, it might be true but it makes him seem like a crappy friend to me. Its interesting the way you've used her dead sister as kind of an inner monologue, personally im not a huge fan of that style but i think it works well here and obv suits your writing style.
Other than that tho i enjoy the story overall (Well aside from the suicide) and i would subscribe but to be honest the story has been completely spoilt for me by your auther notes about people not commenting. So what? maybe they dont have anything worth while or constructive to say. i realise as a writer that comments and feedback are important to you, but if im honest i found your last auther's note alittle offensive (althought im prob being over sensitive), normally im not one to comment unless i have something to say, cos what the point in commenting for the sake of it. it doesnt help you as a writer and its a waste of my time. im not trying to be offensive or disrespectful but i wanted to point out how your attitidude effects my perseption of your story, it may just be me but i think it spoils an otherwise good story.
Anyway good luck with the story, and althougth i doubt ill read it anymore im sure others (that are less picky than me) will continue to love it.

Ah! You killed him! omg, I can't believe that just happened. :o

oh my god.

Loving it!

=D

You're kinda killing me just leaving it on a hanger like that. Must you always do that?
Other than that I looooooooooovvvvvvvveeeeeeeeee it:)

dfjafklsjfklajsf I'm suprised he let her just walk away.

lolololol.
dunno why connor doesn't trust her. haha.

awh, just friends ):

I freAking love your storyyy!

well that didn't go the way I wanted it to, she and oli were supposed to run off into the sunset. connor's boooring. haha.

More Oli, por favor! xD

this was so good. and cute. and I feel like I do know her. I'm excited to see what happens at the party.

i LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY :D kepp up the good work hun ;D