Looking Forward to the Sun - Comments

misery's best friend (150)

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i like this, it's really good.
carry on please!

July 29th, 2007 at 04:09pm

Becci's_Back (100)

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i really like this, and as jocee;DeathEater said I like the way you used Gerard as not a love interest, this is original, and very very good!
please write more :D
xxx

July 20th, 2007 at 12:25am

MellowCosmos (150)

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Thank you for your kind words :) I'm working on writing the next chapter after I get back from my grandmothers.

July 15th, 2007 at 09:01am

jocelynplease (100)

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Why does this story not have comments?
It is beautifully written. Not only was the character human, the story has wonderful potential. You created a character that many of us can relate to and you are using Gerard, not as a love interest (which shows originality) but as a friend.
AND as a bomus, there weren't any grammer, spelling etc problems that I saw. And I'm really picky about that, so...
In short you have talent.
And I look forward to more.

July 15th, 2007 at 08:40am