Love Lies on a Gravestone. - Comments

Loved the update!
I'm looking forward to more and finding out what had happened to her.

Omg, I cannot wait to see what happens next.
Its so sad, but cute at the same time!
Update soon please.
I absolutely love this story.
Keep up the great work.

I am confused beyond belief at this moment. I got the part that her parents and brother atre dead but isn't she supposed to be still alive? She wasn't even home and didn't get caught in the fire so what happened? Is she possibly still alive in some way? I can't wait to find out more of what really happened and it seems like she knows!

Aww, what a horrible thing to have happened to her family!

Though, I'm curious to know how she died then if she wasn't in the house... =\

Look forward to more!

Great update!
i loved it, i still can't help, but think about how she got caught in the fire
update soon please
<3 Michele

Awwww, that's so sad!
Poor girl... That's just... Man... Now I wonder why she was on that walk on Christmas Eve...
Oh, and how freakin' cute is Brian? Oh my gosh, he's so adorable in this story! He's so sweet to her; it's one of the cutest things ever!

Loved the update and I'm lookin' forward to more!

Yeah, I had noticed the name thing too. It was just a mistake, right?

So, she knows what happened to her family... But I still wanna know. Haha. Loved the update and I'm looking forward to more!

I can't wait for more
i need to know what happened to her family
update soon please
<3 Michele

^Yeah I noticed that about the name too. Any particular reason? Or just a glitch?

Major confusion! What happened to her family? Are they dead or alive somewhere? I hope alive, although from the clues I don't really think so. I can't wait to find out what ac tually happened! It's awesome so far!

Well, now she knows what happens.. I can't wait til we do too! haha.

Btw. just a quick note, did you notice you changed her name in the latest chapter? It went from Allyana to Athalya. I thought it was just spelling mistake, but then that was how her name was throughout the whole chapter...

Anyways, looking forward to finding out what happened!

Aww... poor girl. I guess you'd have to wonder if finding out what happened and getting closure would mean she moves on to another world... heaven or whatever... that's sad =(

You know what would be awesome? If it was like that movie, Just Like Heaven, and she's not actually dead... she's like in a coma or something... that would be awesome.... coz at least then, they'd have a chance :)

The guys are being sweet! That's great! But I have a bad feeling she might go away when she finds out... And then Bri will be all sad... I don't want Bri to be sad...
Loved the update! I'm looking forward to more!

Yep, I have an awful feelin g that she'll disappear once she finds out the truth. I think Brian will be absolutely devastated once she leaves. The guys are being so sweet! Can't wait to find out what happens next! Hopefully it will be something happy.

loved it
i wonder if Johnny will find anything
update soon please
<3 Michele

this was an amazingly awesome update
i can't wait for more
<3 michele

I'm so happy that they accepted her so easily! For Jimmy, well I'm not surprised, it's The Rev we're talking about here. It must be so hard for Brian. I mean it's obvious he wants to touch her but at the same time he almost freeszes and doesn't want to hurt her feelings by pulling away. And for Allyana it must be awful to be invisible almost as if not really existing. I hope you find some way to bring her back to life, although I'm expecting that she'll disappear in the end. Maybe after disappearing, you could make her soul appear in the body of another girl that's dying or something.... Anyways it was great and I can't wait until the next chapter!

Awww... compromise! Smart girl = p

At least they believed him that she was real and they didnt freak out.. that was good :)

Be interesting to see where you're gonna go next...

Aww, it was cute that she was able to communicate with the boys and stuff. But it's so sad that Bri can't touch her...

Loved the update! Looking forward to more!

yay
they liked her (i think)
so basicly if she touches anyone long enough they die
cool in a very creepy im so not toucher her way
i might poker her though lol
*pokes air*

Hey! That was great. Sad and happy at the same time. Sad because Allyana thinks it's not possible, ans happy because the guys believed Brian. I wish it was easier for them to be together, but I guess it wouldn't be such a good story if it was. I can't wait to find out what happens next!

I'm sorry to hear about your exams, we're in the same boat. I don't know all my grades yet, but I'm praying that I passed. I guess you and me both.