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  • lost2you

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    thanks, haha can you tell me who?
    November 11th, 2010 at 05:27am
  • IntroducingMe!!

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    btw i love this story
    September 19th, 2010 at 02:32am
  • IntroducingMe!!

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    just a head's up, someone has just stolen this story and posted it as their own!!

    its exactly like this one, word for word!!!
    September 19th, 2010 at 02:31am
  • glitter on the floor

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    can't believe it's over. Let m know when the sequel is up
    August 15th, 2009 at 05:40am
  • lost2you

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    sure :]
    August 15th, 2009 at 04:14am
  • iliveontightwadhill

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    Can I please suggest something ?
    August 15th, 2009 at 02:23am
  • glitter on the floor

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    so many updates! its amazing!
    July 13th, 2009 at 08:33am
  • glitter on the floor

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    so many updates! its amazing!
    July 13th, 2009 at 08:33am
  • glitter on the floor

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    hahah its gonna go off haha a MORE PLZ
    July 13th, 2009 at 07:57am
  • glitter on the floor

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    love love love love love it. more soon please :)
    July 8th, 2009 at 02:46am
  • serenailith

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    The only problem with this, that I have, is the fact the chapters are cluttered. The dialogue should have separate line breaks between them, or else it seems to just be one long, rambling paragraph.

    Other than that, this is great =]
    June 20th, 2009 at 10:38pm
  • unbroken13

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    Great chapter!
    April 28th, 2009 at 01:22am
  • unbroken13

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    I like it!
    Please update soon!
    April 28th, 2009 at 01:18am
  • unbroken13

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    I think it will turn out to be a great story.
    I really like the begining.
    Please update soon!
    I'm subscribing.
    April 25th, 2009 at 11:10pm
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