I love this! So adorable. I loved how you portrayed each character. I really like the Ole/Emil pairing, i think they'd make a cute couple and this story portrayed them exactly how I'd imagine.
*whimpers* you know i love this, i've already commented on it before, and i'm waaaay too lazy to give long comment again :XD
you should write more, thinking about that this is your first story on english it's very good <3 and, learn to do layouts to the story :tehe: and yay! it's dedicated to me! :arms:
this is the most amazinest short story,
i have ever read. You portrayed them exactly how
they are. :3