Oh please, oh please! Can I do something? *hug* I...loved...it!
Sorry if I seem a bit wierd because I'm sending you a comment right away. I do this with all my contestants. But yes, I really do love this story. I believe my favorite line was... "I'm coming to rescue my sugar cube." It made my heart just...melt for some odd reason. Feel lucky. That doesn't happen to fucking often. =]
Not that we would mind a pointless sex scene, though.
*winks*