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  • blaqrican13

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    when r u going to have an update
    April 3rd, 2010 at 06:23pm
  • blaqrican13

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    cant wait 4 more
    April 1st, 2010 at 03:47pm
  • Dragonlilly45

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    Thanks for the imput. I'm definately working on speeding things up. ^.^ Please do enjoy the chapters to come. ^.^
    July 11th, 2009 at 03:34am
  • DEAD!Again

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    First comment yay, its a good story but the beginning seems to drag on. It would help to speed it up or make longer chapters :D just thinking outloud here, sorry if you take it offensively, its not ment to be taken that way :D
    July 6th, 2009 at 05:10am
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