Trapped in Paradise My Ass - Comments

when r u going to have an update

cant wait 4 more

Thanks for the imput. I'm definately working on speeding things up. ^.^ Please do enjoy the chapters to come. ^.^

First comment yay, its a good story but the beginning seems to drag on. It would help to speed it up or make longer chapters :D just thinking outloud here, sorry if you take it offensively, its not ment to be taken that way :D