That chapter was so sad, it even made me cry. You know how sad it was, I have been mega happy all day cause we finally got the internet again at home, and i had a great day wth my friend, and you made me cry with that chapter. But I have to say, I like these endings better than any generic fairy tale happy ending that would never happen in real life, where they live happily ever after. Where's the fun in that!?
Both of those alternate endings are really well written. And as dark eyed dreamer; said, you have broken my heart also, twice. But I loved it oddly enough....:) Can't wait for the REAL chapters. :) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P
Whoa! Never saw that coming. I think it sucks when you're having a very good dream and then you wake up and realise it never happened. The saying 'in your dreams' might be true, but what about 'dreams can come true' :D Can't wait to read the other ending.
:O I never saw that coming, it's really good because it has a shocker. But it's sad that all of that never had happend Dx Oh well can't wait to read the ending the actual ending.