Austin is funny. "Promoting another band? We can't have that at all."
For some reason, at one point, when they mentioned Tyler, I thought, "Hey wait, that's my character's name!" Of course I knew who you were talking about, it would be pretty silly not to, but I never consciously made the connection before…
Pretty good. I think you shouldn't have used the word "crappy" to describe the old apartment, or the word "better" to describe the bed. If it was in dialogue, it would be okay, but better could mean anything and crappy is too slangy.
Aside from that, it's good. But when are Mark and Layla getting married?
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Comment on Latest Chapter: I'm glad Layla's not involved. Only comment I have to make on the Layla aspect is that if I said that, I'd probably be trying to convince myself.
Anyway, the drama was great! I hope they can work it out. I'd definitely side with Madison…but I'd probably keep quiet so as not to start any more problems. As for Jackie's action…couldn't she have at least checked to see if the coast was clear before she tried something that crazy? I see her point, but she's just asking for trouble if she thinks she can do that without consequence.