The Rising Sunset - Comments

Breezy;:

When I read the line "...and I then took advantage of him." I was thinking the opposite of what she meant. Hahaha.

This is getting real interesting.

Hahahaha! That's funny, because when I was writing it I was like, "This sounds kind of dirty." So I'm glad you caught that. Hahah. XD

When I read the line "...and I then took advantage of him." I was thinking the opposite of what she meant. Hahaha.

This is getting real interesting.

Whoa. This is pretty cool.
PLEASE UPDATE!! =O

o! Lover.:

Holy crap. No wonder she hates her old self. She feels like if she hadn't been so weak, she could have saved her brother.

It's official. This story is my new favorite. And I haven't even read chapter four.

Yeah. She's still cutting herself down 'cause she begged to save her own life instead of her brother's. So while she's immortal and stronger than ever, her brother rots in that burnt down sunflower field.

Your comments make my day. ^^ I will make a mental note that this is your new favorite and I need to continue to update.

Hahahaha.

Chapter four made me like it more.

XD

Holy crap. No wonder she hates her old self. She feels like if she hadn't been so weak, she could have saved her brother.

It's official. This story is my new favorite. And I haven't even read chapter four.

Epic is good. Haha. You should keep working on this one because I <3 it.

o! Lover.:

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EPIC.

And that's about all I have to say about that.

Hah. Is that good or bad?

I actually really don't know exactly where I'm going with this story. But that's just the fun of it, right? This idea was inspired by my parents fighting all the time, so it's bound to get somewhere, right? x.x

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EPIC.

And that's about all I have to say about that.