Finding Old Friends, Finding New Love - Comments

  • Escaping This Fate

    Escaping This Fate (100)

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    I'm loving the story so far! :D I've always love Jesse...shhhthatsasecretthough!
    May 23rd, 2010 at 05:26pm
  • MarriahShadz

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    Hey, I really am liking this story so far, but I only have one tiny problem with it.
    Mostly just the pronoun confusion.
    Like when you say something like I put your books down.
    Is the story in Lily's point of view or ours?
    That's all I have to say, other than I really do like this.
    Sam and Alex are funny.
    Looking forward to your next update. :D
    May 23rd, 2009 at 08:17am