Hey, I really am liking this story so far, but I only have one tiny problem with it. Mostly just the pronoun confusion. Like when you say something like I put your books down. Is the story in Lily's point of view or ours? That's all I have to say, other than I really do like this. Sam and Alex are funny. Looking forward to your next update. :D
May 23rd, 2009 at 08:17am
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