I'm loving the story so far! :D I've always love Jesse...shhhthatsasecretthough!
May 23rd, 2010 at 05:26pm
Hey, I really am liking this story so far, but I only have one tiny problem with it.
Mostly just the pronoun confusion.
Like when you say something like I put your books down.
Is the story in Lily's point of view or ours?
That's all I have to say, other than I really do like this.
Sam and Alex are funny.
Looking forward to your next update. :D