Half Life - Comments

I feel like I'm tresspassing, somehow, due to the fact I'm not a member of the Coven...
I love your writing style, and I really like this. :D

I am very much looking forward to an update. :mrgreen:

Yes, these chapters are sad, but they are wonderful to read.
You have such a talent for writing.

This is so amazing, despite it being such a downer. It should have a lot more comments and readers.
Your writing is amazing, as I've told you before.

I'm sorry this comment doesn't make up for the lack of them.

Oh my....:cheese:
It's amazing, wonderful, so many words to describe it.

I love it Mina.

Oh, wow. Seriously your writing is just... :cheese:

Thick, like honey that dripped and ran. Sweetest nectar that corrupted your soul, made you beg for more like an opium addict.

That was my favourite part. Your descriptions and metaphors were so detailed - I could literally see, feel and taste the whole thing happening right in front of me.

The only thing is that is was quite short, but I shall wait for the second chapter patiently.