If I Could Take It Back - Comments

Awww, the last chapter reminded me of a few friends. =( It's just so sad how that happens.

Keep up the good work, and don't worry about rushing to update. =)

I always almost forget that you have this story, and then you update, and I love it sooooo much! This one is a great example of how many teenage friendships end up in the end. It's sad really, but it happens. . . And it probably always will.

Great chapter.

I never cry or get emotionally involved with stories, whether true or not, but this was so greatly put together. Great idea (of the linking and writing confessions). Looking forward to reading more (:

Oh, I like Marylin. I like how she's not like, "One thing will make everything better." I don't know, maybe it's how life has been going lately, but I like her pessimistic point of view. :lol:

One Spotted:

Also new were messages of support from people who were lucky enough to need this relief just yet. Forgot 'not'.

Great chapter.

Love Sheen

Yay! Another chapter! ^^ I liked this one because it demonstrated a point of view from someone who basically hated the wall at first. =)

You updated and didn't tell me???

Haha, just kidding :P I'm gonna subscribe, so you won't have to tell me.

Great chapter, updated again soon :)

Love&Inwauh,

Sam

This is absolutely amazing. I didn't even know you had this story going until I looked at the journal. Will there be more? Just asking :)

Love&Inwauh,
Sam

You're right: Simple regrets should be addressed too. =)

Chloe's regret was a really good one!

Another great chapter! Can't wait to see more!

I like that in this chapter Isabella didn't just confess to one of the past people, she confessed in front of everyone. I can't wait to read about the next person.

Another great chapter, as always. I can't wait until my chapter though. I wish it was sooner. XP

Love Sheen

LOVED IT as usual!!! Who unsuscribed?! What's their problem?!

OMG, several hours for just kind of brainstorming writing?! Whoa.

Don't worry about updates, just update when ya wanna! =)

I really like this chapter, probably because I know people like Aaralynn before she saw the light and they're just like her. They complain about their petty problems when the people around them and close to them are going through serious times so this was more relatable to me.
Good job and I can't wait to read about the next person.

Another great chapter! I really love that all of the characters are different, as I have said before.

Love Sheen

I adore the idea for this story.

It is a wonderful plot, and it brings the idea that everybody needs just one little push to do the right thing, to life.

I can't wait for the next chapter.

Yay, she's not conceited anymore! That sounds a lot like one of my best friends though... She is really conceited, but I guess she cares when she wants to...

Wow, I really like this. I especially liked the fact you used a more teenage-y type of problem for this last chapter. :] -And I love the scene with her mother, it makes it more life like.

But, I noticed something odd in there, ‘Are you going to tell him her upset you?... I was thinking shouldn't it be ‘Are you going to tell him he upset you? It's about 2 thirds the way down when reading it, if you want to check it out. 'thought I point it out case you didn't know....

I like that this problem wasn't as serious as the other's. It was very teenager-ish.

Another great chapter. I love how this story plays out and whatnot.

But, since we were talking about this being set in America today, I thought I'd give some suggestions. First, I don't know where in America you're thinking this would be set, so I don't know this one for sure since things are quite different depending on where you go, but before I met you, I'd never heard of a maths mobile and really had no clue what it was. Also, I've never heard math called maths before I met you. Ummmm, oh! Slang. Your slang is very different from that used here. As Mr. Lamb would say, "Write with less colloquialisms!" Hehe. Just had to throw that in. Totally took an English vocab test today.

None of it is like hard to understand, or anything. Its just different from what's used here, and I thought I'd try and help out that way. But again, very good chapter!

Love Sheen