Haha, that was quite funny. The image of Frank playing naked is enough to make anyone chuckle. Good luck in the contest!
May 6th, 2009 at 06:41pm
Oh yes, I laughed so hard at this! Not the evil kind of laugh, just the funny laugh, because that’s what the story is and makes me feel: fun. I like the idea of the bet and the playing naked live, in front of way too many people. That’s a bit crazy, I guess, but if it was his will… :tehe:
Now, seriously. The idea you had is quite awesome, and in my opinion, original; who the hell would feel comfortable playing naked, in front of so many people? Crazy dudes, obviously, OR really horny dudes, after a bet that involved blowjobs… I guess you forgot to mention if he got his reward or not, as they fuck senseless after the gig – and no sign of blowjob, but that’s just one thing missing. I can pretend that they had it before… or that this happened a few days after their second experience with Frank in the nude, as they say it that Frank should do it more often. In my opinion, this line suggests that they tried it out again to see if it would feel the same way without the bet, but I’ll never know, I guess.
I am pretty much happy with that, because as a reader I adore to have freedom to think of something for the story. I like the freedom of choosing what the characters will do next, and that’s why I liked this story :)
Thank you for such a nice idea; I liked it very much :cute:
I love it. :] Make more frikey! :arms:
