hmmm. let's just say I found it oddly hot, and I don't find blood as a turn on at all. so that leave sme to just say that it's written so well. I like that you didn't really finish this one, just cut it, just wrote the small scene, but not the background story to it. it really worked perfectly. (psh: collarbones are hot. ;))
I liked this. I thought it was very well written, and it made a nice change from other stories featuring self harm. It was quite different, in a good way. Great job!
(psh: collarbones are hot. ;))