I Found You, Something Told Me To Stay. - Comments

awesome update! :)

What ever. Your story is awesome and you don't need paragraphs if you don't want them. It's called writer liscence. Ever heard of it? Didn't think so. Keep it up, and would you read the story please?

great story so far
i love how jayde is quiet and not like most main characters
:)

and whos kade?!
i wanna know now!!
update please

You need to fix the story content of this dear.
it'll get deleted if you don't.

Please put in in paragraphs and double space them.
Huge monologs like this shy readers away and make editors unhappy. When posting a story here, your supposed to be writing to the best of your ability.

I think you've got a good start on your story, some parts a little non-believable, but as soon as you fix the content, your sure to get more readers/subscibers.

(:
Thanks, and if you need any help feel free to comment/message me.

more!

Matt's a bit of an idiot, to be honest. He can't care all that much about Jayda since he seems so "cosy" with Jessica... It doesn't seem like just sex.

Jayda seems like she's better off looking elsewhere for a guy, because all Matt's gonna do is cause her hurt with the way he thinks with his dick... as I said before, doesn't seem like he really cares about her.

And I don't like Jessica. She needs to grow up and start dating/screwing a guy her own age... she's quite pathetic, really.

Hope Jayda starts to get treated better by all the people in her life. She deserves it.

Didn't read the last chapter you updated but like i said before its very good so far. continue of the updating and can't wait to indulge in your divinity tomorow :) AND thanks so much for the comment. Keep them coming.

i don't like jessica. and i know what happens way later. hmmph.

Hmm.. I'm unsure of this Jessica girl... I dont know if I like or dislike her... I guess I kind of dislike her coz I liked the Jayda character and I see that Jessica might be a problem for something happening with Jayda and Matt.

But anyways, looking forward to more =)

loved

wow thats really good. i cant wait to read the next chapter.

ooo la la . what happen around the corner? tehe. hahahaha.

hahaha wicked story! i feel the need to comment on yours because you commented on mine. but yeah . totally loving it and keep it coming! i am expecting lots of updates this weekend due to the laptop that you will have in your posession. right right right??? hehehe .

he's screwing a teacher?

Hey!

Not a bad start.. looks like it could be quite an interesting story =) They both seem to have their fair share of secrets from one another which will make for some great revelations =)

One piece of advice I'll give you is simply that you might want to double space your chapters. It's actually supposedly a rule with posting and it just makes it easier to read when it's less bunched up =)

Anyways, look forward to more =)

her dad's a perve, ain't he?

I liked it. Cant wait to see/read what happens soon