Make Me Believe - Comments

Great update :)

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I'm glad that Nick let her explain. That was good. And Hailey is just the best too. She's so cute. Totally got the 5 year old attitude down ;) I'm happy that Melanie is letting him pay for her school and take care of her. That's really good. Not many people would be happy about that. But I guess its good that they can be together and that he knows about her job. That explains so much. I'm a little scared to know what's going on in your head.... :S I don't even have any idea about what could possibly happen that would be bad. I just want them to live happily ever after now. Hopefully like she doesn't end up pregnant by one of her clients. I mean she has to be protected right? That would make sense. And isn't Hailey's dad dead? I think he is right? That's who she was writing the letters to??

I'm sorry to hear that Ben isn't even Joe's. That sucks for him because Carlie was letting him feel like the biggest loser and always on freaking trial because of his extramarital affair when she had one herself. She's fallen in my books now. That was a jerkish move to make. And as mean as this sounds, I hope that Joe doesn't pay any child support because well Ben's not his. He shouldn't have to. Carlie's on her own now, as she wanted it. God, I hate her! Ugh!

I didn't think this chapter was rushed at all. I'm glad with the way it turned out. :) Please update soon so we can see what's going on inside that head of yours ;) Loved it!!

Yay!! I'm glad they made up!! :D
Update soon please :) :)

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WHAT?!?!?!??! NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This cannot happen!!!!

He needs to let her explain what he saw! He has to! No running!!! Don't do this to me, Dani!!! Please please don't! I'm about to cry here! Seriously. Nick and Melanie need to be with each other. They both love each other desperately and for this stupid stupid thing, like her job to come in the way is just stupid. I know she hates her job but she's got to make money somehow and it pays good for her and Hailey. Maybe he'll see Hailey at the park or something. Little kids always have a way of making things better :)

I totally didn't see Joe having cheated on Carley though. But he does need to fight for her for his and Ben's sake. They need to be a happy family again. The past is the past and we can't change it but we can learn from it and become stronger.That's what they need to do :)

Fabulous update!! OMG, it was soo good! Update soon! :D

I want to hate melanie so badly but I cant. Keep updating please!

Poor Nick :(
Poor Melanie :(
Please update soon

This is really good! Update soon :)

Okay, so I finally caught up with this one! I remember now making a banner for it, now I'm so sad that I never had the opportunity to follow this correctly, but I'm here now.
It's such a good story! I liked the whole aspect of him finding the note and then looking for her, and actually find her. Talk about destiny! Ha. Well this is fantastic, and I hope I can get to see the continuation some time!

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Please update soon!
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I really like this one, it's very interesting.
Plus it's adorable.
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Yay! Another update! Loved it!
Sad about Joe though. :( He deserved better than a wife who wouldn't even let him carry his own child.
Please update soon :)

Great update. Can't wait for more :)

So this was definitely worth the wait as I told you it would be!!! :) I'm not so sure that I'm a fan of Nick's snooping and hopefully that doesn't come to bite him in the ass later with Melanie, but I don't know. I don't understand why Melanie would hide Hailey if she meant so much to her either. I'm confused like Nick but I'm glad that he isn't giving up on her. He needs to stick this out and show her that he really does care for her and will love Hailey as he loves her. Now Joe and Carley on the other hand....I'm not so sure about. I mean I get why Joe's upset. I'd hate not being trusted with my own kid too. I think Carley is being a tad unfair about it all. Hopefully they can work it out cuz they don't want to ruin their marriage over something like this. Ben needs both his parents.

So this was a fabulous chapter and I feel like I'm jipping you on the comment but I'll tell you more later when we talk. I have to run to class now. Loved it! Update soon!! :)

This is such an amazing story!
It's different than most Jonas fan-fics, which is a really good thing. :) Lol.
Updateeeee. <3

ahhhh! i love this story!! :] update super soon!

~Elsie

It was so cute when Nick came over, and that she didn't freak out and laughed about it.
Update soon.

MERRY CHRISTMAS.... I LOVE THIS STORY SO FAR.... ITS REALLY SAD IN SOME PARTS BUT REALLY INTERESTING ..... UPDATE SOOOOON OK LOVE

Okay so I have so many questions about this story! But what's new? :P I liked how Melanie wasn't freaked too much by him just showing up there. I just want to know why she doesn't want to tell Nick about Hailey. I'm sure she is such a sweetheart and that Nick will love her like nothing else. Plus this just might help him move on too. I can't wait to see what happens and if she really is the girl from the letters. Still have no confirmation on it. But really would it matter if she wasn't? They are both so happy with each other that it shouldn't really matter. Update soon!