Second Heartbeat - Comments

0oooo! haha! more!

Oh shit :) it's even better the second time you read it. hahaha.
More more more more more more more more more!!

:)

Amazing!!
lol this was a good update!
i thought it was funny when she dropped the forks.. and she was hoping that Zacky wouldn't see and then she turned around and he was staring..
and when he said "I think you should go change" i think he is meaning that she better change or he is never going to get through his meal... cause he won't be able to stop staring at her... Mmm.. i really want spaghetti and garlic bread now...

Loved the update hon!

hhhhahaha they are so akward!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yay for johnny for finally proposing!!!!!!!!!!! :P woohoo!!!!!!!!! :) im soo happy for them!!!!!!!!!!!!!

aw! no! does he not like it? dont make her change! more! more!

haha zacky doesnt seem to be able to control himself around her. although i know her first thought to what he said is gonna be something along the lines of "omg he thinks i look ugly" even though thats not it at all lol

Haha Zack couldn't handle it.

awh! hahahahaah, i love zacky's reaction, and she has no idea what shes doing to him really, but i think his last sentence could've gone over a tad better........... that might notve been the best way to say it, :\ i hope she doesnt react too badly, haha
but please update soon!!
and what was with his mood, before, like right after she told him about wmily and johnny??

oh my god!
AMAZING!!!!!!
i sooo totally could picture Zacky's rection to what Emma was wearing... and i thought it was funnt how she like fell and well yeh.. :P
OMG JOHNNY PROPOSED!! YAY!!!
wooo there is going to be a wedding :D
nice
well done =]

yay!!!!!!!!!!!! johnny grew a pair!! :]
but hmmm, i LOVE how awkward zacky and emma are, and her strategicness of when she fell, even though that was completely on accident, i wonder if everyone else saw that???? hahahaha
but zackys so cuteeee!! : D
awesome update, cant wait for moreeeee!!! xD

oh my god! more! i love it! more! more! more! more!

hahaha i loved zacky's reaction! i knew something funny would happen! and yay they're engaged! but emma doesnt seem that excited about it? im not really sure why she wouldnt be, johnny and emily are practically married anyway. but wait....did you say you wanted to know what we thought about zacky's reaction to emma's reaction to the engagement? cuz he didnt really have one yet....i'm confused! lol

LoL ok so totally had the Johnny/Emily thing pinned but OMG that scene when Emma got to Zacky's house was HILARIOUS!! Beautifully written!! LoL!!

perfect..but he seemed less excited than i pictured or maybe i read wrong....

They should've gotten easier boots to walk in. Why'd she freak out?

yay for Johnny and emily!!! thats so good for them!!!!!!!!!! :P

Haha the twins are dressed completely opposite.

Aweosmely Awesome!!!
i have just read from chapter 1 to your latest update.. and i think that you have done an amazing job!! i couldn't stop reading!

I bet Zacky will totally love what Emma is wearing...
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i love it! morrrrreeeeeee! please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!