Wow, Merms posted before me. Fuck her. >.> anyway. She's right. Really strong emotions in this. It makes me wanna cuddle on you. -cuddlesonyou-
Love the descriptions of everything, especially the last paragraph, with the descriptions of the together-ness. Very well written and easy to picture. Now go write more. -flawsarms-
I like it, it's definitely got some strong emotions running through it, emotions that anyone can feel (and probably has) and can relate to. Update soon!
please write more