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  • darklightdancer

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    man that was so cute! i really liked it <3
    June 5th, 2010 at 08:26am
  • Ryou Bakura.

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    I approve.
    But, there is one thing that bothered me about it.
    "As a novelist, he sees it as weakness, and as a man who likes to talk, he sees it a major hindrance.

    Eiri doesn't enjoy talking to others, unless it's being sarcastic, bitchy, verbally abrasive, et cetera.
    It's pointed out several times in the manga by his sister and even himself.
    The anime doesn't have quite as much character development when compared to the twelve volumes for the original manga, and the one for EX.

    But, other than that minor character flaw, this was wonderfully written, and made me painfully jealous.
    -twiddles thumb with embarrassment-

    Love you, bby.
    May 4th, 2009 at 03:03am
  • Your Addiction

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    Wow. This is really well written. I'm definitely subscribing. You've got a great writing style. Great job!
    May 3rd, 2009 at 07:39am
  • Usotsuki

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    Damn this is some good shit!!!
    Why didn't the schoolers like it? Real stupid people or what?

    I really liked it and would like to read more from u! ^.^
    May 2nd, 2009 at 11:33pm
  • Teenage Dirtbag.

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    I have no idea who the people in the story are, but what I do know that this was brilliantly written and should really have more comments.
    May 2nd, 2009 at 07:45pm
  • Dearly.

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    I really like your writing style (:
    Good job.
    May 2nd, 2009 at 01:04pm