Unreachable Love - Comments

alexagates:

brilliant! loved it! uplifting but really heart breaking.
But in the introduction you said her eyes were a muddy brown then when when you were comparing her to her sister you said they were blue.

chapter 4

brilliant! loved it! uplifting but really heart breaking.
But in the introduction you said her eyes were a muddy brown then when when you were comparing her to her sister you said they were blue.

This story is amazing.

Nearly everyone leaves out the 'religion' aspect. I'm glad you didn't.

I think you should right an epilogue(:

i agree with 'cold day in july'
even if she left i think oliver would go after her
so both please :]

here's my vote: both.
something realistic but happy too.
i dont think you should end the story right there. because i dont believe oliver would let her get away with it.
i know happy endings are cheasy and sad endings are depressing, but i've always loved the idea of something inbetween. because life is bittersweet.

i think everyone is going to say happy ending, because it gives us a break from reality and such. But I need a reality check, so I'm going to be slightly depressing. Either is fine by me, but I vote epilogue/realistic ending.

B

I know people always say that stories with happy endings are fakey, because it never happens like that in real life, but maybe that's why people enjoy fiction so much. Because their own life is so sucky they just want to get away for a while. I know that I don't want more sad endings than I already have, it would be nice to think somewhere out there I have a happy ending, but whenever I hear that, it just makes me sad. So go ahead, and choose whichever one you want, but just keep that in mind. This is a really great story by the way.

I think it will wnd up being great whether you pick a sad or happy ending, or just leaving it how it is now

=[ that made me sad at the end.
but i loved the last line "And I did what I did best. I ran away". ahh, brilliant.
i love the messgage to the heavens. very adorable.
i loved it, but it made me sad. i guess that's normal for me.

aww.
I love it!

Bell reminds me of you.
this story is great, i think it's wonderful how you put your personal stuff in your own stories.
it's cool. =] keep writing.

Well, her wish is comming true isn't it?

haha, my lady is so gullable (sp?)

Im happy and ferious at the same time.
Im happy because Oliver Saved my lady.
But Ferious because My lady felt tingles with him!
GRRR!

Whoa Whoa Whoa Whoa WHOA!!!!
DO even think about what i think your going to do!
I have her on the weekdays.
haha Jp

Lol, So true!

Wow, he seems to be everywhere now,
Hehe.

Im loving this!
Hope for More, Don't stop it is incredable!
Sp? Haha.
I suck at it.

I like it
sounds good :)

I like it! Carry on?
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