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  • chemicalkid101

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    I loved this, insanely beautiful ^_^
    March 24th, 2012 at 02:32am
  • little bear

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    oh man, that was intense,
    i almost shed a tear there for a second.
    you write beautifully :)
    August 3rd, 2009 at 06:31am
  • jadecharizard

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    omfgyaidcbaudgc
    that. was. awesome.
    very hot<33 - Annie
    May 24th, 2009 at 09:02am
  • sailor emo

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    that was sooo awesome

    'don't worry we all make mistakes'

    freekin epic!

    that was so amazing totally just wow and so intence like if you had to watch that onstage it would be so harsh and the air would be so thick you could bite it.

    epic writing!!!
    May 5th, 2009 at 09:18pm
  • bruise pristine

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    Um....can you ignore the spelling errors and the uncapitolization of the 'I' in the comment above this one?
    Thanks.
    May 4th, 2009 at 11:02pm
  • bruise pristine

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    "Will you be my mistake?" He whispered as he placed a tender kiss on my neck.
    "Only if you're my mistake." I whispered back.
    I loved that sweet little part in this story of madness and deciet.
    I just love a story that makes my blood boil then makes my heart flutter all in one chapter.
    You're a very talented writer, and I'm so glad you joined my contest.
    I feel so special know that I induced this storey.
    But, now that I've given you a compliment, I have to tell you something that I didn't like so much.
    The story wasn't much about Gerard and Frank.
    It was rather about Gerard killing Lacey.
    That was the only thing i didn't like.
    And that's just because I'm ultra-picky.
    But, I did love it.
    So don't be mad...be....glad!
    May 4th, 2009 at 11:01pm
  • Crimson kaulitz way

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    my god this was good!
    May 4th, 2009 at 08:27am
  • oxycontin

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    I'M THE FIRST COMMENTER?! DUDE. THIS WAS FREAKING EPIC. :cheese:

    "I picked up the knife without thinking, I heard her walking down the stairs and I could think about was her in some other man's arms and it made my blood boil, it made my skin crawl at that moment I just wanted to make her pay, to make her feel the pain I was feeling."

    I don't know why, but that part really stood out to me. The way you wrote out the anger that Gerard was feeling, somehow made me almost scared to like, even breathe. :shock:

    And the way that he went from denying that he ever killed his girlfriend to sobbing and saying that he did made me raise a brow. I was just like, "wimp." :XD

    Anyways. I see that this was entered in YOUnique's Frerard Contest and I'm in it too. High-five! :tehe:

    So good luck with this and I'm definitely sure you'll win. Hands down. :hand:

    :arms:
    May 4th, 2009 at 08:22am
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