Curiousity - Comments

Thalkon Roiy Denn (100)

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This is pretty good. Can't wait for the next update. Which reminds me i should get writing...maybe I'll do that today. Back to teh present, keep up the good work and update soon!

August 18th, 2009 at 07:04pm

PudgeTheMagicCow (150)

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heyy i love the story. One thing though, you should separte it into paragraphs when there's dialouge. Other then that this is great! :)

July 29th, 2009 at 07:50am

TariRawr (100)

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I love this story i need more of it to digest - i just cant get enough! ....Theres so much suspension.

July 29th, 2009 at 01:43am

Spunky! at the Disco (100)

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this is really good(:
you should deffinetly keeep updating!
xD

June 30th, 2009 at 08:53am

Peeta Mellark; (100)

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This is really good. Keep writing!

May 18th, 2009 at 04:02am

Tick!Tock! (250)

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This story has great potential, I just think you're making it sound too much like Twilight...like with the heroine thing and stuff.....Maybe change things around....other than that...fantastic! :D

May 18th, 2009 at 03:30am

Peeta Mellark; (100)

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Love the story!!!!!!
Sam

May 16th, 2009 at 05:59am

its an infestation (100)

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I loved it :)
yu should keep writing :)
cant wait for moree =D

May 4th, 2009 at 12:21pm