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  • iluvbettyb

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    that was very well written I loved it. at first i was like i hope she explains it well cuz i'm beyooonnnd lost but i liked how you started it out by the end. if that makes sense haha. i like how it all tied together it was really good :)
    July 27th, 2009 at 10:11am
  • november rain;

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    Oh, my God...
    It wasn't the best.
    I know it wasn't...
    No offense.

    It seemed somewhat cliche, I could see a spelling mistake or two...
    Yet somehow.. even though yes I could see it seemed a bit rushed...
    I'M ON THE VERGE OF CRYING! Cry

    O_____O Idk how you did that.
    But that was amazing...
    July 26th, 2009 at 02:51pm
  • Eden.

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    this was sad and left me in awe - I LOVED IT!!!
    May 27th, 2009 at 04:26am
  • Famous Friend.

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    I love the fact that it was so unique and unpredictable.
    I really loved reading this and it just left me in awe.
    I love the way you showed the emotion and your choice or words were just excellent.
    May 5th, 2009 at 01:52am
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