Broken Glass & Hidden Dreams - Comments

Omg, even though Dan and Christian haven't talked all that much, he/ I/ everyone do not want you to leave!!

You write awesome btw, and it made me feel bad for Christian.
*pouts*

I read the newest journal and . . .
Don't leave .
I honestly I don't know what Bella would say to all of that back on the thread.
Or here :shock:.
That was full of so many emotions :cheese:. Make Christian go back to the thread so they can settle it.

Aw
I read this several times and thought about what I was gonna say, so it took me a bit.
It made me sad. You don't really see Christian super!emo often, like, he has this shield up. But then this is like, you see what he's thinking under it.

Yus, Adam definitely gets his anger from Christian :XD
But srsly, daddy

This is why I wanted you to come on, so they can settle it already :grr:
It's like it'll ever leave Adam'd mind that Christian hates him now.

Crapola! I'm beginning to feel really guilty now for Lestat's distractions from Christian.
But I guess that's the sort of creature he is.

Anyway, it was a good entry, even though it was sad and...

It's good to finally hear everything going on in his mind.

Yayayayayayayay! :XD
I love the vagueness of it--you don't know who it is, or what the events that transpired were--but you do know he's sired someone out there and nobody else knows but him.

Adam's "journal" wouldn't be told in his POV--and it wouldn't involve emotions so much as actions. Screenplay it is, and I'm excited

First things first, I would suggest you putting in a summary. I really like to know what I'm getting into before reading a story. Gives the reader some insight into the up coming events.

I read the first two chapters. I'm guess this is a journal of some sort because of the dates for chapter titles. If it is, I like how it's formatted like one. You don't see many journals going into huge amounts of detail and you don't. It's realistic that way. Yet the details you do give are very good. Straight to the point and poetic in a way.

Good job.

This might sound a little odd, but I love how most of the fourth entry was about Angela and Christian, and how much he grieved her loss, but then it simply ends with a few lines about how he found Lestat, proposed, and Lestat said yes. :tehe:
It was a nice, happy ending. :cute:

By the way, the descriptions you used when Christian was persuading Angela were just :yah. Exactly how I would picture Christian to act: charming, seductive and completely unpredictable.

I really do need to write the entry continuing the first time they met. :think:

I swear to God I am in love with this story.
The way you portray Christian is utterly amazing. And the way you elaborate on his past a little more in each chapter is just perfect.
If I hadn't been looking into a computer screen whilst reading this, I swear I would have mistaken it for a novel.
And once again, your descriptions blow my mind.

Where are all the other comments? :grr:

Once again you've blown me away with your writing.
It was amazing how this chapter told the other side of what I'd written, and yet at the same time it was completely different. I loved every second of reading it.
And needless to say, your descriptions made me melt, yet again.

Oh, and because I forgot to say it in my first comment, I love the banner. :tehe:

Your descriptions are impeccable, they are wonderful.
I cannot wait to read more of your journal.
It's drawn me in so much what you have written.

:cheese: Molly...that was...I'm...I'm actually speechless.

It had me spellbound from the opening line. Your descriptions are to die for. Really, if that isn't complete and utter talent, then I don't know what is.

I really can't wait for more. Already I can see how addicted I'm going to be to this journal. :tehe:

Your writing is amazing, really. :arms: I hope you know that.

It is amazing! bring on some more!
would you read mine comment thanks!
Daylan

Brilliant! :cute:

I cannot wait until the next one!

whoa,...this is kinda sick.

keep going, i like this.