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  • quinn allman's hair.

    quinn allman's hair. (110)

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    a really beautiful drabble.

    it was painfully simplistic to me, only because my descriptions seem to drag on for years and this sentence is littered with underlying envy by the way XD

    gorgeous, honestly.
    June 27th, 2010 at 07:22am
  • Glamophonic

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    I love this so much! It's so symbolic and pure.
    It was really beautiful.
    May 7th, 2009 at 03:21am
  • pierrot the clown.

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    Wow, I love how you turned a really simple moment into something so poetic.

    And falls into the sky.
    I specifically love that line; the way it's a contradiction in its own and the way it just ends the story. It's almost like the ocean and the sky and the skyline just disappear and Indigo just falls, nerves behind him.

    All in all, this was really well-written. [:
    May 6th, 2009 at 06:55pm
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