Magnum Opus - Comments

I love the way you write.
It makes me envious.

Kurtni Ramone:

You phrase things so creativly, even though this is a story, I can still sense the poetic elements of your writing and I adore it.

Thanks :cute:

You phrase things so creativly, even though this is a story, I can still sense the poetic elements of your writing and I adore it.

I will kill for her:

it reads like a memoir, yet it resounds of a "coming of age" piece. An intelligent work of yours, that one can't help but look back and reminisce(sp) on their own by-gone days of youth and growing up. Detailed, i felt as though i were reading an entry from a literary magazine while out for coffee and cigarettes with my chums, or at the local cafe catching up on Faulkner...a truly breathtaking work of yours. You have my upmost respect, and i hope to be able attain the high standards you have set for the rest of us on here. I do hope you add more, if not another story of equal fine quality.

What an interesting way to put it. Every praise is appreciated and memorized.
Don't worry, that was only the first chapter :D

it reads like a memoir, yet it resounds of a "coming of age" piece. An intelligent work of yours, that one can't help but look back and reminisce(sp) on their own by-gone days of youth and growing up. Detailed, i felt as though i were reading an entry from a literary magazine while out for coffee and cigarettes with my chums, or at the local cafe catching up on Faulkner...a truly breathtaking work of yours. You have my upmost respect, and i hope to be able attain the high standards you have set for the rest of us on here. I do hope you add more, if not another story of equal fine quality.

raytoroismine:

This is really good. Your usage of language is perfect. It made me really believe that I was standing there and seeing all the things happen.

Thank you. I really want people to experience it, so you saying that makes me feel really good about writing it.

This is really good. Your usage of language is perfect. It made me really believe that I was standing there and seeing all the things happen.

Marshmallow:

i really liked your story it was so well written.

Thank you :D

i really liked your story it was so well written.

Bloodraine:

Ella, this is really, really beautiful. The language you use and your description and guh, everything. And the amount of hard work you put in to little details like 'Ma mère triste' is awesome.

:D

Thank you SO MUCH for reading it, I didn't think anyone would.

Ella, this is really, really beautiful. The language you use and your description and guh, everything. And the amount of hard work you put in to little details like 'Ma mère triste' is awesome.

:D