Demoiselle D'Honneur - Comments

That was NIFTY. I really liked how it had an air of ambiguity despite the fact that most of it was written like a statement. The naturalness of "Though it is a nice change from the nasturtium that keeps finding his way into my linen closet, I must admit" and similar lines is so awesome; it's really wacky but strangely it doesn't sound insane. It sounds like the sort of thing you tell a neighbor, or something. Really well done!

This is so beautiful!
i loved how you ended it with the blood- red petals
anyway, wow, this has to one the best short stories i have read in a while!
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This was just.
amazing.
I like your writing style a lot.

i love this. very beautiful and everyone before me is right it was magical and kind of mysterious in it's own way. Pomegranate is a really interesting name. ;]

This was... magical.
Like, literally magical.
You make Pomegranate sound like a little fairy.
Anyway, I loved it. <3

xoxo

This was so lovely and magical. I quite enjoyed it. :)

Ooohhhhh this is so sweet and beautiful, I'm pretty much a loss for words. =o
- Loved the reference to my story, of course xD, and aw, the author's note *blushes*
- The conversation between Jenny and Pomegranate reminded me a lot of The Little Prince, and how he grows a single rose on his little planet. It's the kind of book that makes you smile through your tears.
- I wasn't sure at first if Pomegranate was an actual girl, or a fairy, but then I realized she could be both, or either, and if the story specified, it wouldn't be as special.
- I loved especially how Jenny's mom only says 'That's peculiar' when she told her about Pomegranate. It's like magical realism. <3

All in all, lovely, lovely work. :D