I so agree with the others, saying 'how the heck do you onl have three comments?!'. I loved the story, but kinda wish she got the chance to beat the fire lord up! C= That'd be sooo cool!! But anyways,loved your story!!
how does this thing have no comments!!!!!!!!?????i love it and considering how well its writen you deserve more pages with a gazzilion comments swear.this story was well thought out and you really showed how the characters personalitys would react to each other you didnt rush into it like most storys u showed that a relationship is about being together in not both pysical but mental you have to love the person even if your traveling with the avatar and hes betraying you with his sister you need to see past that......okay i have no idea y i wrote that long sppech thing so imma jst stop talking um okay good job