Ah! I had NO idea you were going to show us the OTHER bands' POV's! I love it... And I don't know what you have in mind visually for "The Madmen" (which is a BRILLIANT band name, by the way!), but when I re-read that chapter, I pictured Muse in all their British glory. (Of course...I love them.)
Oh, I can't wait to see what happens next! Those guys won't know what hit them when they actually MEET these sassy American girls. :D
Oh! I am so stoked about this story! I know you'd told me about it in private, but I had no idea...
This is GREAT. First chapter, and already I can "see" the characters' similarities and differences. And the dialogue? Perfect. I love the girls' banter with one another. And I LOVE that they're all ALL GIRL band playing Warped!
How much more awesomeness can you fit into one story??
Oh, I can't wait to see what happens next! Those guys won't know what hit them when they actually MEET these sassy American girls. :D