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  • actuallycapamerica

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    I like it! Where do you get the ideas for the stories?
    November 9th, 2011 at 04:51pm
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    I like it! Where do you get the ideas for the stories?
    November 9th, 2011 at 04:50pm
  • eviesays.

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    It was really cool. :)
    October 26th, 2009 at 10:46am
  • Odysseus

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    I loved that chapter. I thought her story was so relateble and real, it made me really sad.
    But in a good way though, you're such a good writer :)
    October 2nd, 2009 at 12:39am
  • Odysseus

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    That was a very touching chapter. I loved the story about the Ice Cream Parlor.

    Update soon :cute:
    August 17th, 2009 at 05:36pm
  • eviesays.

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    Loved it!!! :cute:
    August 8th, 2009 at 09:36am
  • Homicidal Maniac

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    tis really good, keep it up. x
    July 27th, 2009 at 02:52pm
  • eviesays.

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    I liked the update. :D Keep going and I'll love you forever. (:
    July 9th, 2009 at 01:20pm
  • Odysseus

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    I love this story :tehe: It makes me happy.
    I just love the way you write it and how you make the characters feel so real. I love the narration, it is so well-written :cute:
    Please continue this story Wow
    July 9th, 2009 at 01:58am
  • eviesays.

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    The Blue Bandit.:
    I really like the dynamic between Kylie and Conner, and it’s kind of refreshing to read about a male-female relationship that doesn’t involve some kind of awkward romantic feelings.
    I agree. This is one of my favourite stories because it's got a new, cool storyline and the characters are very real, they're not perfect but they're not dramatically imperfect. They're normal, and no, you don't mention Kylie's weight too much.
    I loved the update, and I can't wait to read more!
    Clap Dance
    June 25th, 2009 at 05:51am
  • RadiosAndRocketships

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    Oh, I love it!
    I like the "swimmingly" bit too. Made me laugh. (:

    It's original, which I like, and I'm glad you told me about it!
    June 13th, 2009 at 08:35pm
  • The Littlest Giant.

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    Kylie scoffed and patted Conner’s arm softly. “You are so naïve. Sure at first we’ll get along swimmingly-”

    “Did you seriously just say ‘swimmingly’?”


    I laughed when I read that. I really like the dynamic between Kylie and Conner, and it’s kind of refreshing to read about a male-female relationship that doesn’t involve some kind of awkward romantic feelings.

    But yeah, I really like this story, mostly just because I find Kylie to be a really relatable character. I’m excited to find out what happens on the road trip!
    June 9th, 2009 at 04:49am
  • Post-It

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    Amber annoys me too lol.
    Great update, I really liked it.
    I'm looking forward to this trip, haha.
    Can't wait for more!
    June 4th, 2009 at 03:50pm
  • Post-It

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    I love this story, brilliant idea and you write really well.
    I can't wait for more.
    :D
    May 24th, 2009 at 01:27am
  • eviesays.

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    I liked the update. Dance This is a really great idea.
    May 18th, 2009 at 01:04pm
  • eviesays.

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    I love the idea, it's so origional. AND it's written really well. You have yourself a new subscriber! :D
    May 10th, 2009 at 05:54am
  • Toxic.InTheCity

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    I really like the idea for this story. It seemed to have caught my attention quite a bit.
    I'm interested in seeing how it continues.
    May 8th, 2009 at 03:41am