Let Slip The Dogs Of War - Comments

HEY! I am very fucking inconspicuous, thank you very God damn much! XD

Pike was the only other logical explaination other than the guys because Pete is...well... But I was so convinced that it was Zacky that I didn't even consider him until I saw xXRipMyHeartOpenXx's choice of villian. And even then, I just kinda scoffed at the thought of Pike being able to pull that shit off because I thought and still do, that he's a dumbass. Meh.

This brightened my day even though it's night time and I was completely wrong which I am upset about but whatever. At least you updated and that makes me all kinds of happy. lol.

^.^ leave it to you for the signal to be an act of utter clumsiness ;)

I really liked this. I would have never guess Pike because he seemed so spineless, lol, but it makes sense now that it couldn't have been Zacky. Not only is he eye-candy, he would trigger Pike's rage.

I just hope that, after all the chaos, everyone manages to come out alive, but I'm thinking that's going to be nothing short of a miracle.

I also think the statement about not being able to break Shaun is so true, for every child. You can't break that sort of free-spirited stubbornness. "Fairy tales do not tell children the dragons exist. Children already know that dragons exist. Fairy tales tell children the dragons can be killed. "-G.K. Chesterton. I think there's something to be said for that.

I WANT TO KNOW!!!!!!
That means you need to update so I can...
UPDATE!!!!!!
XD

:( DUDE WHO IS IT?!?! i neeeeeeeed to know!!!!!!!

Okay! Who the fuck it it? It better not be one of the guys! I will not be at all please with that at all!
Just please hurry up with the next update so I can find out who it is! PLEASE!!!!
Awesome chapter by the way :)

CLIFFF HANGERRR!!! OHNOOOO!!!
ahen, anyways.
you are a brilliant writer.
i love you.
errr, anyways again.
i think.
its pike.

I must say that this was a very good chapter. I loved the update, and you should def. update soon. I hate cliffhangers as much as I hate people spitting at me. XP

The only guess that comes to mind is someone that was right under our noses. However, if any of the above comments are true, and it's one of the guys, I vote we kill all of them out of pure principle. However, if it is Brian, I call dibs. I feel as if I never get to kill him as often as I should be able to. =]

You know, if it's Zacky, as much as I'd love to hate him, I would have to applaud him. Or any of the guys for making it that far. Talk about preparation, and intelligence.
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How bad is it that I was a little turned on at the idea of Zacky organizing all of that? Sheesh, there is seriously something wrong with me...

Your cliff hangers are impeccable. I can't believe I don't even mind too much. I love your writing enough that I can just immerse myself in it and be content with waiting for you to drop another of your bombshells. Your creativity never ceases to amaze.

TOTALLY LOVE THIS STORY! keep on rockin' with these chapters chica! can't wait to see what happens next =)

WHO IS IT???!!!!!

ughhhhhh!!! whoooooo is it???? dont leave me like this for too long please!

Damn tat chapter was absolutetly amazing
Hmm i think Tracey could have recognized that especially this girls wouldn't let him escape but she was blinded by rage
I absloutetly loved the moment in the car "....Because you‘re fucking up my Zen moment.", Fuzz' sentence totally made me crack up, just how bluntly she put it
I'm so guessing it is one of the guys, it's hard to say which one, but i really hope it's not Zacky because that would totally fu** up what Jinx did just a few moments before (come on she admitted her love)
i'm really loking forward for more
hope you update soon :)

Oh I really want to punch you in the face for the cliffhanger. Damnit. Why?!?!?! Ugh. I hate you. lol.. <3

Just caught up with this story.
Fell in love with it.
Have spent all day reading it.
Felt a mix of emotions from confusion to anger to humour.

My guess is one of the boys is behind it all.... I'm hoping to God it's not Zack, although perhaps that would be a little obvious? Hmmm no I think perhaps a Berry or maybe Shads.

You have no idea what a fantastic writer you are. Don't rush it, take your time but please...... I CANT BE LEFT HANGING!
I despise cliffhangers. Make it a good'un

xxxxx

I've been told many times, by my parents and friends, that I give very hateful, stinging glares. Lol, I would no doubt be glaring insanely during a situation like that.

I have to agree with Seven's outburst in the story, because I know where it comes from. There's nothing so infuriating as religious zealots who tarnish something that's supposed to be spiritual. It also gives anyone of that religion a bad name. But the spitting and crossing disgusts and infuriates me.

When I see the word smirk, I think of Brian, but it has to have the word smug with it, as well; like a smug smirk. The smirk alone makes me think of Zacky. I hesitate to point the finger at Zacky though, even though he did understand the bible passage/warning. Lol, or maybe you were mad at your boyfriend and decided to make Valentine a super-vindictive ex. That idea amuses me.

But damn, I hate and love cliffhangers. I love them when all I have to do is flip a page...I hate them when it takes the writer weeks to update ;P

I can't wait to find out who it is.

Well the master mind to the evil side would be so random and out there haha I'm going pretty random on this and saying zacky.... don't kill me hahaha i just thought out of the box. But i hope i'm wrong on this one ha.

I'll be honest, I got my conclusions from your massive but quietly done overshadowing business. Everything kinda clicked for me with this last one but the real question in my mind is, did it click right. Probably not but yeeaahh...

And you made the short joke all on your own. I didn't even have to this time. lol.

I say that the beautiful hunk of just pure perfection called the damn Charger takes it rightful place back, by the way... and fucking soon. Roadrunners are nice but they're no damn Charger. But if what is up on that truck is what I think it is... I grinned like a maniac just thinking about it.

You should update again soon before I hurt you for the cliffhanger... XD

So you want to know what the best song to listen to while reading this is? Save Our City by Ludo. Seriously. It's definitely badass, and only adds to the awesomeness that is this story.

Oh Zackerdoodle, you have impeccable timing. What a moment, eh? But I guess nothing brings out emotions more than high intensity circumstances. And a matching sai! You little romantic, you...

I'm dying to know what happens next. Although given the details of this story, I feel like I should mention not literally. But I am extremely curious as to how all of this came about. I love the little blood thirsty routine everyone springs into; it just seems so practiced. It's amazing! I can't wait to see you put it all to use.

Please update! Me love you long time!

There is still a small part of me that wants to believe Scratch, but if she really has got anything to do with Shaun being taken I really hope they beat her ass to oblivion!!!

Can't wait for the next chapter! :)