Omertá - Comments

sorry i haven't been on in a bit.... so...i loved it!

I can't get enough of this story. Every little detail has me craving more. You're so intricate, and describe the life of a gangster well. I quite enjoy this, =)

More will be up soon - try to stay at least two chapters ahead so I have time to completelymangle polish them before putting them up (even then I don't always manage it), but I realise I've been falling behind a little at the moment. So. 'Nother chapter in the next couple of days.

Don't know why I'm putting this here. Meh.

Yes, it's Italian :tehe:

Haha, I loved this chapter. I've only just caught up with this but I love it. I had to go translate the italian...but yeah :) I think it was italian right? It would make sense.

Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee :D

Aw! They're so cute when they're little! I especially love the way Anna talks. The italic placement was great. You completely captured the essence of a petulent little girl! Yay!
Update soon, please? You're amazing! <3

aww, poor little frankie! i hope his sister isn't always such a prat! i love this story<3

Haha, that was just plain fun. I love how Anna kept saying to stay out of there to Michael and Gerard. It was cute. Onto the scheme soon, I hope?

hehe, i like the italian mobster side of Gee, i think it's pretty cool, how they're the little fishes and they're gonna grow up to be sharks. more soon?<3

Very nice reference to the mattress war- I like how you put witty remarks here and there. Also, I like how you are using actual crime family names... it adds a little more realism. I like how you are shaping Gerard's character a little more by each update... now to find out what becomes of Gerard and Frank's scheme.

This is interesting, you seem to have done some research (which is good). Consider me subscribed.

Well, this is pretty much amazing. I love the idea. Great job! I'm definitely subscribing.

Really good. It's very interesting. Update soon, please.

This is an interesting idea so far.

You seem to have done some good research.

Keep up the great writing!
Bee.