One of the best stories i've read in a looong time. I love this! I love how you make fun of pete... because he happens to be extremely annoying in my opinion. And I thought I was the only one that would ever even DREAM of making fun of pete. lol. And ryan is cute. Like, a littlegirl boy kind of cute. Write more please! :]
OMG!! I have been laughing ever since I started this. Okay, you did NOT give Pete a pink bag and make him say 'OMG like totally' all in one sentance! That just like, killed the word totally for me...wow. And hahaha, Ryan is such an idiot. "What were we to do with Ryan chasing a butterfly?" Wow...I don't even know where you came up with this but its genius! haha