DUDE My friend has those composition notebook shoes! Although the bottom of his fell off haha so he can't really wear them anymore XP
And can i just say I love that you described Craig's outfit, but not Sky's hahah (I just read that over and I didn't mean it in a mean way, I thought it was funny that's all, please don't get offended haha)
Haha this reminded me of when Boys Like Girls played 2007 Warped Tour in St. Pete, FL. cause they performed that song. and then when he said "Bring On The Rain" it started drizzling. And he's like "OMG is it really raining? how fucking cliche" haha And then they performed "Great Escape" and when the chorus came, it was POURING. it was really funny, as if the weather was reacting to the music or something.
And about updating whilst in school. School starts back up for me Tuesday, and I'm already in like a rush to finish my summer reading. So I think as not to stress yourself out as much, You should pick a day (M,T,W,TH,F,SAT,S whatever) that you will update. That's what I do (sundays) and it seems to be working out better. Not only is the writing more thought out, but the chapters are longer. I skipped last Sunday cause I had family visiting, but this Sunday I gotta update again haha. But that's just a thought for you, you obviously don't have to listen.
Just read chapter 17 and I totally love what Ronnie did. Pure genius writing right there. Beautiful. lol. And chapter 18! AH! I loved it. So sweet. I think Craig wants to have a kid with every girl. lol. just kidding. I really like your story lol and i'm glad i made your day. haha xoxo <3 esmeralda
OMG!!! I totally love your story! Super original. =D I've read like thirteen chapters and still going at it! Hope to get more! I love Craig he seems so sweet. Personally if a guy would have done to me what Ronnie did to Sky i would have killed him before he even got to jail. LOL. Anyways keep up your good work. =) I will be commenting again after I read more chapters! Yay! I cant wait! =) Sorry stories always get me excited. Let me subscribe now before I forget. xoxo <3 esmeralda =D
“I, Craig Mabbit, love you, Skyler Green. I want to spend my life with you and I don’t want anyone to stand in our way. I want to have kids with you and grow old with you."
Awwww that was sooo coot! I liked this chapter! Can't wait for more! :D
Awh, new reader here. Bahaha Kaylee's hilarious. But yeah, glad to know things ended with Ronnie positively. He doesn't seem like that bad of a character, considering how everyone else treats him.