Vampires Will Never Hurt You Unless You're Eliza - Comments

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!
I LOVE VAMPIRES!!!
I LOVE EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS STORY!!!!
ITS SO AWESOME!!!!
MORE PLEASE!!!

No worries. I'll pass on the skittles.

They make me sick.

Ooooooo
its okies ..*sniffles* i will survive!!!!!
more please?

Ooooh suspense is rolling in! Well, that anxiety cliff has always been pushed towards the end of your chapters, but this one was a waaay over-dramatic! I really hope Bert didn't die, I don't want him dead, I know he dislikes the guys but he had reason to because he didn't know the truth but if he's dead I won't look at Frank ever the same and then he'll never know the truth, meaning he'll never forgive them for his stupidity and low-tolerance and things will spiral down and I think I'm going on and on and I could keep going but I won't and end my conclusion in this huge paragraph thing on a new line and such.

This is bad.

OOOO
i wasnt expecting that O.O
loe it ^^
more please?

oh wow...I wasn't expecting that at all!!!
Great update! I loved it!

omg poor bert

great update
More when you can plz!!!

Oooohhz.
like total pwnage
SUCK IT BERT
bahaha

sorry i haven't commented in ages..
but u r doing a great job with this story
keep up the great work.... and it was an awesome update
luv
-Elfy

wow
excellent update!!!
I loved it!!

Dan said, “The others went to the bathroom.” I find it funny how Quinn and Jeph both had to go to the bathroom at the same time and at the wrong time.

Heh, that line got me to laugh to myself a little. It sounded a little awkward. xD If you know what I'm saying. "If you're picking up what I'm putting down."- Adam Lazzara.

Bert had better believe it. How could you cut the chapter at that point? I want to know Bert's response, if it'll make me happy or make me cry and something. And alright, I'll read that "one shot slash" but I swear, if there's a sex scene in there, I will hide from it Heh...

i wanna know how Bert reacts
more when you can plz!!!

whats berts reaction??????????/

I love it!!!!
YAAAAY
update!!!!!!

Hey,
Oh my God this is weird. Funny but weird. I LIKE IT!! :) I can see now why your name is Vampire Queen. My name says it all too. I love reading MCR fan fictions, and considering what your expertise title is, you do too. Keep submitting thos fan fictions.

this was an awesome chapter! can't wait for the next one!

Wheeeey.
how about in the story.
me and frank get together :] haha.

bert just listen 2 Gerard
more when u can plz!!!

Ugh, killjoy, Bert. I don't really like the way Bert's going with this, but I can't entirely blame him. No, I don't like the fact he seems to be taking this to the extreme point of everything, but I understand that he'd be mad at Gerard. But it /is/ his fault that he won't stop to listen to what Gerard has to say to him.

But all of that just leads me to loving the story even more. There's utter brilliance in stories that have me arguing over a scene or part of the story with myself, not being able to make up my mind until I get a lot of the story absorbed into me, then still be confused at myself for a while. Yeah, another reason to hate this "sexual vampire" Eliza.