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  • precious gravy

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    This is seriously awesome!
    The word choice and the imagery was absolutely lovely!
    I could actually feel this guy's pain and actually understand the twisted logic going on inside him.
    I loved how you described every single person he shot.
    If this isn't a oneshot, maybe you should continue and write about the aftermath from different perspectives, which might be interesting ;)
    Great job! I'll have to read more of your stories =]
    June 18th, 2009 at 08:45am
  • Serious Stranger

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    Oh my god, it's amazing Katie!!
    Love, it's Love.
    May 19th, 2009 at 12:41am
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    Oh my god, it's amazing Katie!!
    Love, it's Love.
    May 19th, 2009 at 12:41am
  • Emilghiely

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    Encore, Encore. Seriously.
    That was amazingly wonderful and appealed to my buds on stories.
    Wow.
    May 10th, 2009 at 05:29pm
  • Freak Show.

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    Oh my God, that was amazing!
    You have such a talent. Don't ever stop writing, or I'll...bite you. Clap
    May 10th, 2009 at 02:22am
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