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pweze update... pweeze?!

my fluff has four stars :')
<4569

my fluff deserves all ten, though.

This Story Is Almost Painful To Read. >.O
It's Fantastic, Though, Keep it Up.

Amazing!
I loved Joey's reaction and huge behavioral change. ;D
Poor Billie, though.
Update soon!

Amazing. I applaud you. Such tension- and Joey's new personality is like whoa. Update soon!

Yet another amazing chapter, Aly. More? *begging face*

Loved it!!!! Keep going with the updates, I want to hear more about Joey and his newly cruel psycho personality. *laughs*

YOU UPDATED YOU UPDATED YOU UPDATED I LOVE YOU :')
but, yeah, anyway--
Joey's whole aggression deal has me complete intruiged, and I'm guessing it's Law and Order inspired? ;D I dunno, but it all seems to Law and Orderish and it's making me love this and that show even MORE now o.o
and Scartlett's little "think I can help" also has me interested.....
SO UPDATE SOON BB.

Billie is frustrating me! I get that Mike has an illness, but Billie shouldn't be so quick to forgive him!
I like that he does, in a way, because it shows that he's sort of brainwashed in a way because he's known Mike forever, so he's sort of incapable of hating him, even though he's screwed his life up pretty bad.
I really like how you made Mike have a disease. You gave him a reason to be so psychotic because, otherwise, it wouldn't be as realistic.
So, yeah. I think this is really good! =D

lobotomy.:

I... seriously can't even believe how fantastic that was.
especially the end. Billie kissed Mike on the top of the head like that?
that just said so fucking much, Aly <4569
you amaze me, I love you.
I can't wait for more.... like always XD

........What she said, minus the <4569 thing, though, cause I'm not in on that. *laughs*

New Reader Here.

I Must Say, First, That This Story's Pretty Fucked. [Uhm. No Pun Intended.]
It's Really Good, Though. *Waits Patiently For A New Chapter*

I... seriously can't even believe how fantastic that was.
especially the end. Billie kissed Mike on the top of the head like that?
that just said so fucking much, Aly <4569
you amaze me, I love you.
I can't wait for more.... like always XD

I didn't think he would confess...I'm happy he did, but, on the other hand, it's Mike! I like Mike! *laughs* I suppose not after all the stuff he's done to poor BJ.

Plot twist after plot twist, now a confession, and now Mike is Jake's biological father? That's a killer piece of information right there. Jeez...Mike is one f*cked up guy in this story. I kind of want to yell at him now...

Haha.

Well, needless to say, Aly,

MORE?

This story is major epicness!
Lot of twists and turns that weren't expected AT ALL, but that's what makes a good story. =)
More please?

Oh wow I wasn't expecting them to catch him. I'm completely captivated by this story lol and you write it so well :) can't wait for more!

This story is amazing. And they finally caught Mike. -sighs happily- UPDATE SPOON!

ooooooh. I just love this. you know that, but seriously.
I can't wait to see what happens.
FUCK ALY UPDATE SOONSOONSOON <4569

You know, Molly's right. Your writing is a bit like Stephen King. I'm reading one of his books right now.
But anyway, applause goes out to my best Mibba friend for yet another groundbreaking chapter. I can't believe Billie's going to jail when he knows that Mike's a mental case and needs to be locked up. Poor Billie...Poor Joey...
God, I missed your updates when you were on hiatus =]

you know what, Aly? you write a lot like Stephen King.
I just noticed that, and it makes me love your work even more <4569
. . . if that's even possible XD
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now to review the chapter;
LOVE :D I love how you've done this, worked this story into what it is.
another plot twist, right there, and I can't wait to see where THAT goes :D
and all of the tension and mixed feelings for Mike, and how truly psycho Mike is, and how kind of fucked up Billie is too in his own way....
I love you, and I can't wait for MORE!!!!
seriously, this was too long of a wait ;) buuuutttt I know why <4569

.......aaaaaaaaaaaaand, left hanging yet again. But, I LOVE IT THAT WAY!! 0_0 More???????????????