Oh, that was amazing. Poor Billie. I loved Mike, he was so sweet. And I thought the way you showed Billie's madness, how it wasn't over the top or anything, was really well done. : ) And some of my favourite lines: "I-I cheated on you." It's a whisper. "What?" Not a whisper.
But he's not in my head. He's in my blood. And my blood goes down the drain.
omg..i'm so scared i mean i feel my blood freezed ..it's freezing only when i think at billie and this thing even if it's not true but i can't stand it...it scares me ....billie shouldn't been through this :( :cry:
Oh my gosh Rape has always creeped me out and this story has taken it even further But you write it in such a way that you just get sucked in I love your writing so much, I'll though I'll never sleep again More soon?