I Want You To - Comments

Re-reading this I have to agree with my choice, this really was the best entry I got in my contest. I still love it, but I still want to know what happened to her Mum. =D

that's really good...kinda like a cliff hanger though...still really really really good

Wow, that was amazingly written. I think the only thing I found wrong with it is your coding, the center coding doesn't work on stories or in comments, only on signatures, but other than that, amazing. I do want to know what happened with her mum though. ;)

I loved that. It was amazing.

That was really really good :)

Now that was a super cute story! The beginning was a little hard to get through, but the ending was so sweet and I love how you wrote it.

Continue writing, okay?

omg i LOVED THAT!! It was amazing!! XD You should write more ^^