I Want You To - Comments

  • Save My Soul

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    Re-reading this I have to agree with my choice, this really was the best entry I got in my contest. I still love it, but I still want to know what happened to her Mum. =D
    March 16th, 2010 at 03:47am
  • CallMeALiar

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    that's really good...kinda like a cliff hanger though...still really really really good
    July 3rd, 2009 at 10:55pm
  • Save My Soul

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    Wow, that was amazingly written. I think the only thing I found wrong with it is your coding, the center coding doesn't work on stories or in comments, only on signatures, but other than that, amazing. I do want to know what happened with her mum though. ;)
    June 23rd, 2009 at 08:12am
  • Kirsty

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    I loved that. It was amazing.
    May 16th, 2009 at 01:49am
  • sloshopgirl.

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    That was really really good :)
    May 15th, 2009 at 08:23am
  • Raven Goodwoman

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    Now that was a super cute story! The beginning was a little hard to get through, but the ending was so sweet and I love how you wrote it.

    Continue writing, okay?
    May 13th, 2009 at 02:46pm
  • stary_night_blossoms

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    omg i LOVED THAT!! It was amazing!! XD You should write more ^^
    May 11th, 2009 at 11:48pm