One girl. Six Guys. Oh the possibilities (Completed) - Comments

  • VioletFem

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    Okay, so a few things that I have on my mind...
    I absolutely LOVE this story that you've written here...But I think that maybe you should proof-read it or something...It's just that there are a lot of grammatical errors and such... Now, I'm not trying to be rude or anything, it's just that it's really annoying to have to figure out what you mean by saying "lining together" rather than "liVing together" That's all... sorry if this is a pain to you, but it's just my opinion. This is great though! I love the plot and storyline!
    August 31st, 2009 at 02:37pm
  • gardetoncoeur

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    Loved this story. Loved it. Loved it. Loved it.
    I can't wait for the next one! :D
    July 22nd, 2009 at 05:11pm
  • Happy4living

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    can't wait for the sequal!!! :mrgreen:
    Yay! You mentioned me! Sorry I couldn't comment in like forever, I just came back from my vacation with one thought in my mind "Mibba! Story! One Girl Six Guys! What if the plane crashes?" I feel so guilty.... :( But I'm here now! I stayed up all night just to finish where I left off, and wow I was suprised. They are getting married!!!!!!!! Yay!!!!! Im like jumping right now, and They are both eceinte, eceinte right?!!!!!! Is it a girl? A boy? Ahhhhhhhhhhh!:D Twins maybe? Can't wait till you write the sequel! Im so anxious to know what happens! Aren't we all? So Laterz and exuse moi absencei? (Exuse my absence)Suck at french, I just add a Z to everything I say. ily! <3
    July 20th, 2009 at 07:33am
  • ice cream

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    can't wait for the sequal!!! :mrgreen:
    July 18th, 2009 at 10:21pm
  • dragongirl142

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    oh wow...two pregnant girls living in the same house...this should be intersting...
    canĀ“t wait for the sequel!!!
    July 18th, 2009 at 07:50am
  • xoxomusic363

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    haha once it said that they both were sick i knew that both of them were pregnant :P haha loved it loved it loved it :P cant wait 4 the sequel!!!!!!!!!
    July 18th, 2009 at 05:23am
  • Childhood;;

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    i love the ending, i actually kind of laughed when they both said they were pregnant (: cant wait for the sequel, good luck!
    July 18th, 2009 at 04:36am
  • cakecoffeeandzombies

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    AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! I LOVVVVVVVE IT! :D:D:D:D
    July 17th, 2009 at 11:08pm
  • Life is...

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    I know I have not comented for like ever but OMG I love the story and you better make a sequeal like soon like in a week!! I loe it i cant say it enough! Love you!
    July 17th, 2009 at 09:34pm
  • False Illusions;

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    OH MYYYYYYYYYY GODDD!!

    How could you leave me hanging like this?! XD
    Tehe I love you really <3

    You gave me my happy ending :]
    July 17th, 2009 at 05:43pm
  • ColorMeArtistic

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    LOVE IT
    July 17th, 2009 at 04:36pm
  • ice cream

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    can't wait for the ending and the sequal!! :mrgreen:
    July 14th, 2009 at 06:00am
  • xoxomusic363

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    awww i just knew they were gonna get engaged :P :) :D i loved the last 2 chapters :P they were adorable :)
    July 14th, 2009 at 12:06am
  • False Illusions;

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    Ahhhhh hehe that song is beautiful. <3

    So sweet. XD
    Max caught it! :]

    Happy!Happy!Happy!

    <3
    July 13th, 2009 at 10:28pm
  • iwanttokillmyself

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    Leave me alone
    July 13th, 2009 at 07:53pm
  • xoxomusic363

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    hahahahaha lol her mother is funny :P
    July 13th, 2009 at 05:40am
  • PINKeyeliner

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    i still love it yay
    July 12th, 2009 at 11:24pm
  • ice cream

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    i can't wait for the wedding!!! :mrgreen:
    July 12th, 2009 at 10:58pm
  • False Illusions;

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    You were making me worried again!

    *Breathes* XD
    July 12th, 2009 at 05:20pm
  • PINKeyeliner

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    still i love the story but i need you to write more :-)
    July 11th, 2009 at 09:39pm