I'll Kiss You as My Final Goodbye - Comments

awh. this was such an amazing story, i hope you come back soon! <3
(:

Aww Bianca. :[
I'll wait for you, I'll be right here. :]
... and on facebook.

thank you for creating an awesome story. :D

alright. I have FINALLY caught up with your writing schedule.
I CANNOT WAIT TILL YOU GET BACK!!
and BTW we're baking cupcakes again for paramore's release and JOsh Farro's birthday!~~~ *swooon*
Brian's an ass.
he always is....
in most stories :)
UPDATE .... please?

I'm sorry I haven't commented in a while! I was so happy to find multiple updates when I finally got to check my e-mail! I love it so far! Especially the game her and Brian are playing! I think it was the girl that's her half-sister or whatever and she's also he one that lit Biran's house on fire. Anyways it was awesome as always and I can't wait to read more!

hahah, I'm not even mad that the last update was fricken short as hell. XD
It was worth it. lol.
(:

ha ha brian ha ha

lmao, wow.

That was very crazy.
: )

LOL

lmfao, that was great. write more! pretty pleaseee.

HOLYSHIT. GAMES! YAY! XD I love those type of games. XD

loved! <3

I adore this...
But just because i love it doesn't mean i can't give you constructive critizism.

"I was about to yell at him but he was suddenly so close, I was left speechless. His hands were on my shoulders and slowly sliding down until they settled on my waist. He pulled me closer to him and I gasped in surprise."

In this little paragraph- if it can even be called a paragraph- it wasn't too clear. You should have been more descriptive about where he was. Because was i read it, i pictured their houses being a duplex, and there being a door in-between the two seperate houses. Which didn't make too much sense at first, because when i really tried picturing the house at first, it had grass surrounding it at all sides. So it confused me.

Also, in the previous chapter, being chapter eleven, when you described where Brian was and how he was in his towel. I still couldn't picture the two of them too well. 'Cuz i found it weird that they could talk to eachother so easily, when it seemed as though the windows were closed on both their properties. But maybe they just had great lip reading skills.

Well great work. Keep writing!
xx

cant wait to see what happens next

WHOOO!!!!!!!

: )

Have fun for those 3 weeks!

you're leaving :(
and we still haven't watched transformers yet!
well you have, but whatever
=))
I just finished reading finally,
AND I BAKED COOKIES!

ha
bri lives next door
and he's wearing nothing but a towel

umm...Brian's favorites...

in an interview he said that his two favorite movies were Point Break and Batman (the first one by Tim Burton). That is all I really know about his favs. :D

Ohh! I bet it's Brian and his hotness. XD
Don't worry babe, I'll wait patiently for your awesome updates. :] Swear. :]

Lovelovelove! <3

LE GASP! :O Who had set Bri-Bri's house on fire?! :O
Suspenseeeeeee!

Loved it, babe. :] Can't wait fer yer next fawesome update! XD

omg
is he going to move in with her
he is isn't he
omg he is
cant wait for the next update
and i cant find the black parade is dead anywhere
and my mom is kinda mad that i like mcr and avenged instead of lil wayne
i dont know why though
so i have to hide the fact im buying the cd's

poor brian D: