did not like the threesome but i do not like threesome ever, so did not read the threesome part so i could not tell you if it was well written or not, but you are a good writer so i am sure that it is good hope you update soon love reading the story
No your threesome didnt suck! Like Ana said, " a little warning would have been nice". Also, I like that Ana didnt like Brian that much (I mean think of the jealousy between Matt and Brian that would have happened had she liked it!). Great job!
I love this story. Seriously it's cool as fuck. Sudden change of heart much? "Shoot him" I would have stared at her in shock too. XD Update soon please. <3